Yesterday, it was for me a really exhausting day.In the morning i came to the shool where we were doing a bit grammar and also we were playing a game.Afterwards i went to work to the charity from 1 till 6 .When i left the shop i went with my manager to have a beer but you know when you star with one.....
At 8.30 i got home as i had a spanish lesson with a english guy who want to go to Spain next year and to be honest im really happy with his improvment because i remember when we started one month ago that he didint know a word and now his level is not so bat, also because i think he's a determinate and hard-working person.By the time the lesson had finished my flatmates were drinking in our tiny garden so i decided to join them for a while.At one i was quite tired and i had to start with my homework so i left them as i thought don't put off for tomorrow , what you could do today....
See you tonight mates!!!!
will read later, ok, must have break soon
ReplyDeleteYesterday, was a really exhausting day for me. In the morning i came to school where we did a bit grammar and we also played a game. Afterwards i went to work at the charity. I was there from 1 till 6 .When i left the shop i went to have a beer with my manager but you know when you start with one.....
ReplyDeleteAt 8.30 i got home as i had a spanish lesson with an english guy who wants to go to Spain next year and to be honest im really happy with his improvement because i remember when we started one month ago that he didnt know a word and now his level is not so bad, also because i think he's a determinated and hard-working person.By the time the lesson had finished my flatmates were drinking in our tiny garden so i decided to join them for a while.At one i was quite tired and i had to start my homework so i left them as i thought i couldnt put off to tomorrow what i could do today....
See you tonight mates!!!!
hi marta
ReplyDeletelook at how ive correcetd ur writing.
look at the mistakes you make with word order and also use of past continuous.btw you need to say put something off TO tomorrow.
Keep up with the writing.
Maybe you could tell me this: what do you enjoy most about working in the charity shop? try and use some new vocab and structures which we have been learning. re-use anything that you have previously made mistakes with, or you think you are weak with. see you later. Andy